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page one of my graphic novel "rivalry"..typo error kagad
finishing it up while watching miami vs spurs game 7 kasi e..distarcted hehehe..hope to finish 10 pages of this soon...
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Improve mo pa yung anatomy and gesture drawing skills mo para mas okay. :-) and yung sa first panel, Inedit mo ang isang photo dun tapos ginawa mong cartoonish effect or a filter. Long way to go para mapaganda mo ito but you'll get there. Update mo tong thread mo para malaman natin progress ng comics mo
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nice one good sir.. keep up the good work.
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Great work. up for this.
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sorry mga chiefs! but decided to put the "rivalry" story on hold for now..instead im doing this piece for now, already finished doing 3 pages of these doing other pages as we speak..hope to here some feedback from you guys and oh, some "karma" would be great too..
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Bilib ako sa inyo sir! Nice share, be proud! ..
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More! More! more! Aabangan ko ito sir JohnLemon24. Thanks for sharing.
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nice one sir.. ipag patuloy mop lang.. aabanagn ko ung mga updates mo
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ok ito... Abang mode din ako...
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Since you want a feedback here I go.
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Staging : Way off yung staging at yung background is crying out for an improvement. Wala kang vanishing point at walang perspective. Simply flat.
Character design : Needs a lot of improvement talaga, out of proportion yung body. If you want a close-up shot dapat maganda yung proportion ng mukha.
Lighting and Shading : confusing kung saan yung light source mo. Your cross hatchings needs more improvement.
Panel Layout : Madaming resources on how to draw comics and how to properly layout your sketch per panel. May isang panel ka na edge to edge yung characters, that's a no-no for a comics.
What you did : Scanned your inked (looks like a ball pen ink) drawings then edited it using photoshop, used the normal brushes, patong lang ng ilang digital brush ink sa drawings mo.
Overall : If you're serious on your comics, as I was serious in giving you feedback then you need to improve your drawing skill badly.
Additional : di ko gets yung art style mo. Haha is it anime-ish or western style?
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