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Title: my comic :)
Post by: seeker11 on June 21, 2013, 10:59:28 AM

page one of my graphic novel "rivalry"..typo error kagad :)) finishing it up while watching miami vs spurs game 7 kasi e..distarcted hehehe..hope to finish 10 pages of this soon...:)

(http://www.freeimagehosting.net/newuploads/u3qvh.jpg)

Title: Re: my comic :)
Post by: Ozymandias on August 21, 2013, 01:51:18 AM

Improve mo pa yung anatomy and gesture drawing skills mo para mas okay. :-) and yung sa first panel, Inedit mo ang isang photo dun tapos ginawa mong cartoonish effect or a filter. Long way to go para mapaganda mo ito but you'll get there. Update mo tong thread mo para malaman natin progress ng comics mo  8)

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Post by: sugunoy on November 14, 2013, 01:54:03 AM

nice one good sir.. keep up the good work.

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Post by: crashtest on February 24, 2014, 07:23:17 PM

Great work. up for this.
Thanks you for sharing!
:)

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Post by: seeker11 on March 24, 2014, 09:38:35 AM

sorry mga chiefs! but decided to put the "rivalry" story on hold for now..instead im doing this piece for now, already finished doing 3 pages of these doing other pages as we speak..hope to here some feedback from you guys and oh, some "karma" would be great too.. ;D

(http://i552.photobucket.com/albums/jj349/johnlemon24/page1.jpg)
(http://i552.photobucket.com/albums/jj349/johnlemon24/page2.jpg)
(http://i552.photobucket.com/albums/jj349/johnlemon24/page3.jpg)

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Post by: IORI™ on March 24, 2014, 09:57:09 AM

Bilib ako sa inyo sir! Nice share, be proud! ..

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Post by: EreimondB on March 24, 2014, 10:07:58 AM

More! More! more! Aabangan ko ito sir JohnLemon24. Thanks for sharing.

 :penge: :penge:

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Post by: gainax_jin on June 08, 2014, 06:12:27 PM

nice one sir.. ipag patuloy mop lang.. aabanagn ko ung mga updates mo ;) ;) ;)

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Post by: jamesbond on June 08, 2014, 07:11:35 PM

ok ito... Abang mode din ako...


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Post by: Ozymandias on June 10, 2014, 12:37:29 AM

Since you want a feedback here I go.


*****



Staging : Way off yung staging at yung background is crying out for an improvement. Wala kang vanishing point at walang perspective. Simply flat.


Character design : Needs a lot of improvement talaga, out of proportion yung body. If you want a close-up shot dapat maganda yung proportion ng mukha.


Lighting and Shading : confusing kung saan yung light source mo. Your cross hatchings needs more improvement. 


Panel Layout : Madaming resources on how to draw comics and how to properly layout your sketch per panel. May isang panel ka na edge to edge yung characters, that's a no-no for a comics.


What you did : Scanned your inked (looks like a ball pen ink) drawings then edited it using photoshop, used the normal brushes, patong lang ng ilang digital brush ink sa drawings mo.


Overall : If you're serious on your comics, as I was serious in giving you feedback then you need to improve your drawing skill badly.

Additional : di ko gets yung art style mo. Haha is it anime-ish or western style?